the sun, the life and i

hi friends,

i had written this one about a couple of months ago, it’s about the game i play with life and the game life plays back with me…

its a poem of love, life, hope, dreams and sorrow..

hope u all like it, am still new to poems though:P

the prayers were bright

the nights so dark

days were unhappy

and hopes so stark

i knew the sun would shine

sooner or later

it did after so much time

it happened that was better

the prayers were still there

and the nights so cool

the world was luxury

oh! i had become a fool

the sun had to set again

and quickly it did

life was murky without a rain

and anyhow i had to get rid

the sun never sets for eternity

people don’t stay fool for ever

i have learnt my lessons good

am not gonna forget that ever


9 responses to this post.

  1. hey glad to see you here 🙂


  2. thank you!!! but have still gotta get into the groove!! 😛
    thanks for being the first to comment yet again here 🙂


  3. Posted by Anonymous on 29/06/2010 at 2:27 pm

    nice one!!


  4. Posted by Indrani.. on 29/06/2010 at 2:29 pm

    nice one!!


  5. Posted by vivek singh on 29/06/2010 at 10:11 pm

    hey!! thanks everybody, and i guess that anonymous is miss radhika!!! 🙂


  6. oieeeeeeee
    masstttttt poem 😀
    and someone said they dinno poetry hmmpppfff 👿
    never lose hope and always remember –
    the darkest hour of the night is the one just before sunrise 😉


  7. thanks megzy!!!
    yeah am still trying, cant come up with many words to rhyme or make rhythm, that will come with time!!
    the darkest hour of the night is the one just before sunrise.. so true, so true 🙂


  8. Posted by Anonymous on 03/07/2010 at 3:55 pm

    looks like u have jotted down yourself life out there..full of struggles, joys, and sorrows.
    superb poem!!!
    have courage.have faith in God and yourself!! God bless you 🙂

    Anonymous 🙂


  9. to the whole extent!! yes i have..
    the struggles were many, sometimes still are but whats the fun without it..
    thanks for the encouragement..
    god bless u too!! 🙂


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