setting me free


richard who writes at artswebshow had posted a challenge to write a free flow poetry that comes to mind listening to a piece of music (the electronic single ‘time is the enemy’ from quantic’s debut album the 5th exotic)

here goes my attempt but considering am new to poetry and its nuances plus this one essentially being a rudiment of my mind captured and held by music, i guess its pretty much ok

friends, do read n give ur honest opinions:

music, music, music!!!
the flow is smooth
the beats so pure
the tingle in my brain
austere
the path i follow
the days i see
the love i want for myself
waiting, waiting, waiting!!!
life is long
weary, teary
music is soft in my ears
its medicine
for my soul
weary, teary
soft as the petals, loud as the gun
hard on the heart, kills my burn
the dreams are blank
soothing, scintillating
music i follow with the keys
lovely notes indeed
its passion, its life
and its setting me free
ideas, peace, a life ordinary
cool, dark, loosing memory
i go and go and go
hope this never stops
my dream
austere

poetry is basically a redolent form of art which is suggestive and aromatic. hope the aroma of this one leaves u with a good felling. anyone game enough to take the above challenge can happily oblige. i bet the experience would be pleasant

poetry is aromatic

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11 responses to this post.

  1. damnn!!!! that was brilliant vivvy..!!!!!!
    Dude u definitely excelled me in this one 😀
    supesplendofantabulous poem dude 😀

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  2. hey!!! tum to geeta kapoor ban gayi.. thanks yaar!! 🙂
    excel u.. thats still a wish 🙂

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  3. Posted by nandini singh on 10/07/2010 at 9:23 pm

    great going brother!!
    never give up ur dreams……..u will get them all…
    i believe u….u r the best….
    🙂

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  4. thanks didi, i dont believe u actually read my post 🙂
    u are the best too 🙂
    i cultivate dreams, don’t just chase them 🙂

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  5. Posted by RoH on 11/07/2010 at 1:11 am

    aromatic it is 🙂 beautifully written Viv! 😀
    this one gives a warmth… loved the way you have brought in the emotions and the diff forms of music 🙂

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  6. hey roh!! thanks a ton buddy!!
    emotions rule everyone, we cant deny! 🙂

    Reply

  7. Posted by Anonymous on 11/07/2010 at 7:09 pm

    Another wondrous from you dude!!! 🙂
    loved your free flow poetry a lot
    You have proved that you are the best !! 🙂
    God bless you!!!
    and keep up this Zest of taking up challenges in life ..

    Anonymous 🙂

    Reply

  8. Posted by vivek singh on 11/07/2010 at 8:42 pm

    hey thanks dude!!
    but best kuch zyada nahi hai yaar, abhi to aaya hoon!!
    but i am gonna try my best 🙂

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  9. Posted by Anonymous on 11/07/2010 at 10:03 pm

    my pleasure to praise such a nice poetry 😛
    aate hi itni dhansu performance to abhi to picture baaki hai mere dost 🙂

    reading this second time 🙂
    waiting for next bestest 🙂

    Anonymous—

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  10. nice one…..likd it! 🙂 🙂

    wish ya luck! tc!

    Reply

  11. Posted by vivek singh on 11/08/2010 at 7:07 am

    @maverick: thanks dude 🙂

    Reply

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